by twofourthree
This is really a great story, thank you for your time and effort.
Clare reminds me if someone I know. Can't wait for the next installment. Way to go Jay!
This is a good story. And a better story for having less Odell in it. I would love for this story to explore the sexual tension between Jay and Jesse. I would also like a tender, loving scene between Jay and Evan, so that Gay Male Sex could be portrayed as something more than monstrous and grotesque.
Still, the story is exciting and romantic. I'm enjoying it. 5 Stars!
and hope other readers also recognize how well the "issues" are slipped in and handled.
This is more like a novel about life instead of just a story of incest. You seem to be building to a big (pardon the pun) climax. I just wonder if it is what I am thinking it is going to be.