All Comments on 'Cleaning'

She absolutely had to ask her mother, or if not, then she could ask Mr. Brandt! It's mean to leave us hanging like that. Five stars anyway, even if you're mean.

The pacing slips from time to time but over all well done

So well written

Hiya, you say she was wearing tights but then standing there in only her socks and sneakers.. Even if she was wearing tights under the socks, you wouldn't be able to take them off without taking off the shoes.

Good stuff.

story cracked me up. I will be thinking of this one and laughing for a few days.

I always enjoy reading your quick little stories.