All Comments on 'Clinical Trials Ch. 06'

by KegRoller

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well that was just dumb.

Bitch slap Tracie and never go back. This was pointless. No stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
great orgasm denial

Another great chapter! The mystery you are creating with Ted and the other man breaking into her house to gather evidence is very nicely done! Also the orgasm denial theme is a winner and you do a swell job at it.

Couple suggestions - You can prolong the orgasm torture much longer I feel. She only gets to cum rarely and remains on the edge most of the time. Thanks to the amazing characters you have created in the story.

Also, I would love too see one of her family members (preferably an older person) who she really trusts take control of her orgasms. But in the most naive and innocent ways without making it obvious or forced.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What's next

Congratulations on this amazing series! Can you tell us what's in store for poor Brittney in the near future?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hot.

I love the chapter as always, but maybe cool it with the frequency of the word slut. Slut was used about every other sentence and I was getting so annoyed

liz33ndliz33ndover 6 years ago
still another awesome chapter

great writing, it kept me interested, and more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Crossed the line

Can’t quite explain it properly but it crossed the line from slight kink with blackmail to outright sinister and wrong

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Sorry. I bailed out about four paragraphs into chap. 5. Boring! Way too much oral and not enough sex. Any male interested in that much oral seems like a closet gay boy. I'm just too hetero to enjoy it.

puma0916@hotmail.com

TrstxxxTrstxxxalmost 3 years ago

Love this chapter

solepleasingsolepleasingabout 2 years ago

More with feet and mentally breaking her down, please. The reluctance to begging is soooo sweeeeet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

GREAT STORY

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