by KegRoller
Bitch slap Tracie and never go back. This was pointless. No stars.
Another great chapter! The mystery you are creating with Ted and the other man breaking into her house to gather evidence is very nicely done! Also the orgasm denial theme is a winner and you do a swell job at it.
Couple suggestions - You can prolong the orgasm torture much longer I feel. She only gets to cum rarely and remains on the edge most of the time. Thanks to the amazing characters you have created in the story.
Also, I would love too see one of her family members (preferably an older person) who she really trusts take control of her orgasms. But in the most naive and innocent ways without making it obvious or forced.
Congratulations on this amazing series! Can you tell us what's in store for poor Brittney in the near future?
I love the chapter as always, but maybe cool it with the frequency of the word slut. Slut was used about every other sentence and I was getting so annoyed
Can’t quite explain it properly but it crossed the line from slight kink with blackmail to outright sinister and wrong
Sorry. I bailed out about four paragraphs into chap. 5. Boring! Way too much oral and not enough sex. Any male interested in that much oral seems like a closet gay boy. I'm just too hetero to enjoy it.
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More with feet and mentally breaking her down, please. The reluctance to begging is soooo sweeeeet.