All Comments on 'Club Games'

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sedaguesedagueover 8 years ago
Proofread

You really need someone to proofread your work before you submit it. There were many serious mistakes that greatly detracted from the story. The story was good but it would have been much better without the mistakes.

liz33ndliz33nd9 months ago

That was really good. Hot as hell

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