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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Great story, love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please Continue

Love to see a series

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
5 stars

great to see you writing on this site again. it's been too long!! loved the story.

No1holywoodNo1holywoodover 5 years ago
Excellent

Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Composition

Well written. Reminds me of some wonderful clubs in the NW part of the US.

hulvamulvahulvamulvaover 5 years ago
Great job

so naughty yet full of love and great possibilities for expanding the story. a few misspellings which caused momentary confusion and interruption of the flow, but quite forgivable considering.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
please don't continue

The girl reaction is impossible to believe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
no virgin story

Not the first time I've read it.

Is it yours?

Why didn't you polish it even a little?

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 5 years ago
The family that plays together

stays together

dikupinyadikupinyaabout 5 years ago
great story

ready for chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Please make a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Chapter 2?

Please continue this. You’ve done a great job and would love to see where this continues

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please continue

Can’t wait for the next chapter of this. Great to see how she does with getting to be part of the club or if they decide to bring Val into their little group?

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I like watching football (Falcons), drinking beer, sex, reading some stories on here and of course writing my own! If you have any ideas for a story message them to me and I'll see if that idea interests me as well. New ideas are also welcome!