All Comments on 'Coach Daddy Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Beautiful story.. Eagerly waiting for second part.

cali_fraecali_fraeover 8 years ago

Some spelling errors but those are easy to overlook because you've captured the realisation of Joey's pent up desires wonderfully, I felt instantly involved. Looking forward to chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story

A wonderful sissy story that I hope will continue

hornybiman64hornybiman64over 8 years ago
Great

Looking forward to more.

JD2100JD2100over 8 years ago
omg i loved it

i have a similar fantasy and really want to see what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
loved it

I'm male 22 bi and i have this condition myself,

I'm glad you started off with the bullying point of veiw because it's a very real part of my life. And followed through with my favourite fantasies.

I can't wait to see where you take Joey

I hope she gets to enjoy her breasts as much as I enjoy mine

Charli xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
please continue

I loved this story. Please continue and tell us how he sucks all the team's cocks and how he (she) gets fucked by all of them. I can't wait to read the next chapters.

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 8 years ago
wonderful story

Oh so hot.. please continue... I would love to have breasts like that...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Train all you want

Some people's gag reflex can't be overcome and you kill them? How? They choke, gag and vomit. With your cock blocking the vomit, they swallow it straight into their lungs, literally drowning in their own vomit. Stupid, poorly conceived story. No stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
isn't this just a gay story?

This is more of a gay story than anything...oh...surprise the wife is going to dress him

teddie_grlteddie_grlover 8 years ago
A good start

Looking forward to additions to this story. Quite a sexy start.

Ignore the pragmatist comment from that 'Anonymous' dork. We all know that these are for the most part, fantasy stories, and there are those few, that just want to bring reality into fantasy, just to spoil.

ModdleModdleover 8 years ago
beaut writing

Keep it Up!

juliahCD7juliahCD7over 8 years ago

Great story, keep it going!

loverofintersex1loverofintersex1over 8 years ago
Uh oh -- not more S&M....

Cock-sucking, yes. Ass-fucking, yes. But... Why oh why "submit to me," etc. Can't a guy get horny enough having his cock willingly sucked and being offered an ass to fuck, without him also being a bossy fucker? I love sissies and I know sissies love sex. Isn't that enough?

tinalikesithardtinalikesithardabout 2 years ago

Love this. Wish it was me getting this big cock down my throat.

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