All Comments on 'Coach's Conquests Ch. 07'

by MrDean70

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sacksackover 18 years ago
I think this series would work much better....

If you submitted it in longer segments with at least a little bit of sex in each one. Otherwise, a small snapshot such as this should go in the Non-Erotic category.

trscroggstrscroggsover 15 years ago
A little sugestion

I would recommend packing this story into fewer chapters of more pages, it would be more readable that way.

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