All Comments on 'Coach's MVP'

Loved your writing skills and the relationship of the coach and student. The setting was perfect as I grew up in STL in the 70’s and was too shy and closeted to hit the gay bars at that time. So fantasying about going to places like the grove are a big turn on to me. Then it was the CWE. Always too shy to hook up then.

Hello,

Every comment you make will lead to me becoming a better writer in the long run! Plus, I love to hear what people think! I encourage you to send what you like and what could be better. Thank you!

Please continue. I just feel confused that whether characters are humans Or where's?