All Comments on 'Cock Ring of the Gods'

keep going, good beginning

Great beginning hope that you continue

I'm looking forward to reading where this goes...

A great start, can't wait to see where this one goes

...what they wrote, & I can relate to some of the first parts. Every down & out guy has dreamed of something like this. I definitely want to see where you go from here.

Your storyline, basic plot and character development seem to be your story's strengths, but you need to concentrate more on thoroughly editing each chapter. Your tenuous sentence stucture, mapapprops and misspelled words largely distract the reader from completely enjoying the journey upon which Mr Mastaff has embarked. Otherwise, can't wait for your next chapters - realizing his full potential (gradually), annointing his newly discovered God Hood, experimentating in NOL, putting the bitch Cindy in her place and giving that usurious cunt Jane what she deserves. Not to mention whatever other perverted schemes your mind cooks up. Good Start & Good Luck

Cant wait to see more of Your story. I agree a Proof Reader would get the Story Flowing. but it would still be a Good Story. with out 1

Marvelous start, I'm anxious to read future installments; but you must fix some of the obvious grammatical and spelling errors. They do not prevent the reader from enjoying the story or understanding it; they're just annoying and reduce what might be a great story to a good one. Example: you used "there" instead of "their". Readers can fight through it, but it demeans the overall quality of your work. Suggest you print it out, wait a day and proofread, not for content, but errors. You don't have to be an English major to spot the obvious ones and correct them.

Again, marvelous start!

This first chapter tops anything I've read here in over a year. You've included all the elements that make a story readable and fun. A bit of editing would make it even better. I'll be looking forward to more chapters soon.

can't wait for the next chapter to this story. Don't make us wait to long for it :D

You have started what could truely be a great story. I hope we don't have to wait too long for future installments.

I loved it. I hope we get another chapter of this story soon.

Don't make us wait for another chapter!

It left me hanging, I check every day for more, your story is one of the best I have read in a long time.

more

Please continue! Can't wait for your next installment!

Not to bad of a story, but it is a little over the top though. 18" cock..no thanks, 12" would be plenty though. Even better let him have the power to adjust the size up to 18".

Please post more soon! I'm loving it so far.

Laugh out loud funny. Enjoyable despite the short length (lol).

Straight to chapter 2. :)

N'Allens is the place where anything can happen.

I am just going to read this as you said and take it as a joke. I really hope that you do not believe that is really what manliness is. Other than that it was interesting and I hope it will continue.

Probably the best story in the world.

And then we learn his name is Rod. Couldn't stop laughing after reading that.

what a great read, totally love how this is starting out... thanks