All Comments on 'Cocksucking Competition Ch. 01'

You can't push your tongue against the roof of your mouth with a cock or your finger in it. Ask your significant other to do a demonstration. I couldn't get past the beginning paragraph.

She pressed her tongue against the roof of her mouth, with his cock in between. If you've ever had it done to you, there wouldn't be any confusion, trust me.

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This "move" can also be performed with a woman's breast. Cover her breast with your mouth, with her nipple underneath. Now swallow. Your tongue will reflexively squeeze her nipple against the roof of your mouth. It's basically the way a baby nurses.

Perhaps I could've written that paragraph more specifically, though I wasn't really focused on the technical aspects of the act itself, but with the reaction it evoked.

As always, I thank you for your feedback.

The players' particulars were dispensed very nicely during slack time. Group sex is not my preferred genre but the author's skill displayed in previous stories short-circuted that genre stumbling block.

This is shaping up to be a great (and fun) story. Moving on to part 2!