All Comments on 'Coed Naked Backpacking'

Well written. Good luck in the contest.

I think I'll start hiking with my wife. Now to find the other couples.

At least one more time with all present at the same time.

Yes, good luck withe the contest.

I enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. :)

This is a really fun story with cool characters. Really hot to read! It makes me want to get back to nature. :)

I will say that you occasionally slip from past to present tense without any obvious reason why, and it gets a little confusing. But all in all, great work!

Great story - fun story line and good old fashioned nasty outdoor sex. Definitely worth following up. Good luck in the competition!

And this was a good story by Group Sex standards. Good luck in the contest.

However, one word of caution for your contest endeavors. Let me suggest that in future you only enter one story per contest. Give readers just your best one - there's no need to clog up the CONTEST page with lesser tries.

Thanks, dwayne in alberta

I find that one of the toughest parts of any story like this is the moment where one character has to become the convincer. Often, that's when any sense of reality drops out and we, as the readers, are required to just go with it or to reject your proposed narrative and move on.

By splitting the convincing between both Mary (as the primary instigator) and Mike (as a willing accomplice), you bridged that gap nicely, and the rest of the story flowed with a straightforward and pleasant sexual pace from there.

Well done. Good luck in the contest.

Coed refers to students.

Was expecting some hot student action

that, in this particular story, Mary is an asshole-bitch and Mike is a wimp/cuck.

I couldn't give anything more then 1 star because of Mary. Poor Nancy.

this should be a 10 part series

thank you!

My wife tells me of a time before we met, when she was backpacking with the outing club at her college, led by a guide who lusted after her. About 3 nights into the trip he snuck into her tent and the 2 of them spent the rest of the night fucking. Nobody else ever found out.

Nice

There is so much more to share here. This all started with a pee in the woods, right? So we need a chapter with some watersports. And more...and more...

I enjoyed this very much