All Comments on 'Coffee, Paper and...'

what a sexy reverie. I can't wait until you write more. You think in an erotic language, and it resonates with me, and I'm sure many others. Thanks again!

I wish you would write more! The way you write is very intense and gratifying.

Carol, after reading your current story of coffee with John, I went back to look through your earlier stories. Interestingly, I had read your first (shaving) story some time ago and had scored it four stars. Somehow I had missed this one.

It's not easy to write in male first-person voice, especially when your female persona is the object of the first-person character. I thought it was well done here. It was a nice quick little vignette. An easy read.

Lue

foreplay and introductions included, TK U MLJ LV NV

using yourself to describe characters in a story, TK U MLJ LV NV