by Swampcooler
Real far out there storyline, but it worked. Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing
This was wonderful but it needs
another chapter for closure, since,
as mentioned earlier, the end is a
bit weak.
Nice series, though.
LeFrog
I enjoyed reading your story, and I don't think the ending was weak at all. You wrapped up the story lines of the older ladies in smooth and satisfying ways. Then you brought the youngest woman back into the picture and really showed the conflicts in her life and what her options were. This was no cliffhanger ending. Hope and romance came to the fore, with lovely lives opening up for all the major characters. Well done!