All Comments on 'Collateral Damage'

Nice, laid-back writing style. The threat of the bikers was kept as a sense of disquiet in the background and there were no overblown heroics. Enjoyed the story and look forward to more.

Good short story. I wished they stayed together at the end, but it still works with the way things were going for the story.

Congrats on your new story…enjoyed it and brought back memories. Will read more.

April

the significance of the title isn't clear.

Down from five stars to four as a result.

What story?