All Comments on 'Colleagues with Benefits'

Is that what you call the scientific method!

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The scientific method, I assume!

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Excellent Trying for a change or improvement often works wonders.

Extra crunchy, that. Good on ya, Skippy.

Good entertainment but not to the level of development I’m used to seeing from you. 4*

Funny story. 5 stars.

Love in the age of Asperger. Hilarious. Good for Roxanne and Prescott. Probably good for Ingrid too. Harold’s covered too. He’s got his bowling ball - three holes to choose from.

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Well done. Both my wife and I chuckled through reading it. Thanks much.

Weird.

Strange!

Sounds like Sheldon and Amy to me....

I mean, yea. Wife played stupid games and won stupid prizes. Only loser in this is the other husband, who for all we know is a decent and faithful guy.

Nah. You use be so good. Here lately, not so much.

I was waiting for the punchline when we would learn that Roxanne and Prescott were robots encoded with human feelings - lovable 'wham, bam, thank you Ma'am' prototypes!

Huh?

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If he didn’t like sex, why did sex with Roxanne work? If he was so naive about how to have sex, why did it appeal to him with Roxanne? If his wife wanted it more and better, why didn’t she teach tne idiot if — as implied with his encounter with Roxanne — h3 was open to “learning”?

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Just didn’t work very well.

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3 ***

If you want to read a really stupid story you can always count on skippy.

Sorry, Skip, this has to be one of your worst.

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"My husband does not" - Are these people robots? Use contractions. "My husband doesn't."

Neat structure, no waffle. The short paragraphs make it staccato but I think that works well here. Thank you for posting it.

Weird and fun.

silentsound

Cute, nerd love!

As us old salts always say, “Whatever floats your boat.” Finding someone who pushes all the right buttons makes sex a whole lot more fun!

Wow, how stupid can this get?

Silly drivel with nothing particularly interesting.

Hilarious!

Meh

I don’t mind the occasional silly story.

That was quite odd, in a Big Bang Theory way. Amusing.

I think I'm getting used to your sense of humor.

Cute story. I don't know how you come up with these stories but I'm glad I follow, thanks. 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

AWFUL. Enough said about that elementary style, writing. 1* for the effort, though.

Cute; as a good change up. It was invigorating to see cheaters win; I wouldn't want it on a regular basis but it was great this time.

Silly, but cute. 4*

Maybe it was a lack of build up but I didn't really have any feelings towards any of the characters. Maybe it was intentionally written that way being how dry their personalities were being scientists who knows. Either way notmy favorite of your stories but I thank you for writing it.

Not a bad story, but I was under the impression this was an 'erotic literature' site. I'm sorry, but I found this a bit too clinical.

Neato. D

Good story lack of character development but well written

Interesting

worst dialogue ever!

Justplainjeff

Stick around. There are a lot of damn good stories on this site that have little or no erotic content. There is no requirement that they do. Check out the top 20 LW stories and see how many ain't.

Very dull

A little different and that's a good thing. I understand the "Joe Friday", just the facts dialogue. It fits the story but it's dry as the Sahara. 4*

interesting twist on an old story

Got a kick out of this. Amazed at the comments the characters were 'dry' and 'clinical'.. OF COURSE they were.!

Kind of Revenge Of The Nerds-ish. Both their marriages were shallow, tepid, and distant, and at least the cheating wife is exploring alternatives. I hope she appreciates the freedom he will be giving her. Its where you finish that counts, and it reads like the two cheating asshole workmates enjoy and deserve each other. Maybe this marriage will work. Thanks for the effort.

Story does not have any tags - you should use them as a courtesy to you readers. Seemed deliberately emotionless, hence, boring.

Funny cheaters. That’s funny.

I enjoyed it! Nice job!

Different and a bold departure. It's sure a refreshing break from the tsunami of 800-work cuckold-doormat stories all written precisely following the Cuck Writers Checklist. Skippy jumped the fountain at Caesar's in 'Vegas, and I think he landed a lot better'n than Evel Knievel did! If not, he might've bitten off his tongue, since it was obviously planted well in cheek! 5/5!!

Cute.

I won't call them clinical or dry. They were a bit analytical though. Went about the task with a scientific bent of mind.

Nerdy analytics have resolved the conundrum and established some workable outcomes for both.

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1* nothing more needs to be said.

I know these folk. I've worked with them, often.

Their words were so stiff, I didn’t think it possible for the sex to not be purely mechanical. They clearly were nerds, who never watched Revenge of the Nerds.

Amusing.

Cute story, Skip! I've known people like them!

"I don't want to be one of those women who keep cheating on their spouses." just *spouse* sorry that was bugging me

Funny, for the more refined, humorous, very subtle! Tee-hee!

Nicely done,

Nice humorous tale. Liked it. BardnotBard

Fucking stupid

A cute story but a bit dumb. Learn muff diving during the honeymoon - if you want to keep her...

I am enjoying the lightheartedness in your stories.