All Comments on 'College Lesbians Ch. 01'

A pleasant read but I must say I don't know if it's because I've been reading too much erotica or something but I kinda feel like that's a bit too much sex for something that has only started recently and if you are to decide to make a sequel then the sex scenes might become bland, at least that's what I think. The storyline is good though. Thanks for writing.

I like this story quite a bit bet than again I have to concur with HypeBeast that a bit less ex and a bit more talk wouldn't hurt the story or it possible (hopefully) sequels. The characters have a great potential and so do the feelings they discovered for each other. They did some basic conversation but it wouldn't hurt to see them on a date to deepen those emotions and maybe fall in love for more than just their bodies.

5* still with hopes for more in the neat future!

A very yummy story! So well done! Thank you!

I liked it. No complaints from me.

Well done! Well developed characters and story and no, I do not think there was too much sex. My only nitpicking complaint is that you used the word "smirked" so often that it became distracting to me. Further, I think smirk has a negative connotation. One of the definitions I saw said that a smirk implies that you think you are better than the person you are smirking at. This beautiful couple, under this definition, certainly were not smirking at each other. Thanks for the story.

I love this story it's awesome and almost the same thing that happened to me 😋😉😘

I was a redshirted freshman and she was a junior, both played on the volleyball team. I had never had sex before(both dad and mom were ministers) and I became her 'goldstar', she later explained what that meant and I was proud to have that title. I don't think I was a true submissive but there is no doubt she was in charge and loved me as much as I did her. She went to the Olympics and I became a teacher and I am ever thankful she taught me.

A bit too much "smirking" and not sure about the tongue getting to the G spot but otherwise quite good.

I thought it moved a little fast, but still it was a total turn on, didn't quite get me off, but still a five star story

I totally loved this story, and am looking forward to chapter 2. Thank you for sharing it with us!

While the story line is well done, the number of misspellings, words with dropped letters, etc detracted from reading it.

Loved the story.

I hope Your readers realize We All make mistakes.

Your reading stories on Literotica, enjoy it for what it is and get over Your Almighty selves

Good story, well written for the most part, however there are some typos that need to be addressed. And please, get rid of the word "smirk", it isn't used in proper context here or in your Coach story. A smirk is sarcasm in lip form, replace with smiles or grins.