All Comments on 'Color Wars'

Short and sweet, just like you, Michelle! Well done! Five stars. But please note, it was "epithets" more likely than "epitaphs" (although their intent was to lead to his epitaph!).

I didn't see the ending coming, but it was powerful! Really nice. Five Stars. Bravo. -- JB

Didn't see the ending coming at all. Nicely done

But works as a bit of flash fiction.

I love getting feedback on my stories.

I'd fix the boo boo if Lit let us edit stories. That's one of the the things I like about WRIST.xxx - you can edit your stories after they're posted there.

Being from Detroit I can understand everything

Nice short story. I'm moving on to another of your pieces.

Love this short story. It's a welcome break to all of the down and dirty stories, and is artfully written.

Don't try poetry, keep on with this you already master. Very good.