All Comments on 'Coma'

The mind bogles at the possibilities. I enjoyed it well done.

Peter.

loved the story man! waiting to see where it goes from here. Thanks for shareing.

an interesting story. i do not blame the wife for moving on,it would have been nice if she held off. but that's life and everyone has different needs and values.

but fun story. Nicely done

Thanks for writing. I am giving it 5***** just for the lightheartedness and good writing.

Thanks,

-Pultoy

you may have to stick around a while longer, TK U MLJ LV NV

It has become Village Idiot Central over there, too much stupid to appreciate a novel little plot like this. Good idea, good writing, good editing, good story!

Glad I saw your name. Thanks for sharing.

This is both a romance story, a cheating wife and a fantasy tale. Good work!

gave u a 5 for unique and good writing - had no idea where you were going with it - which is why it is so good.

I have missed your unique story telling. This one is no exception. Keep up your excellent writing.

Mendon

...you are something else!

A unique perspective - you have a mind like a bag of worms!

(That's a compliment by the way -- but then you'll know that)

Great stuff - thank you.

...Mag-Ma-Man? I've always read it as Magma-Man... Ha! Great perspective as always! Certainly nothing to gripe about here! Five Stars!

This has such interesting possibilities and could become a nice little series.

Think about it!

Mr Wolf

he could use to get back to his fucking slut ex wife...treating him like thatwhile he was ill....what a whore...

For a multi part story.

are in for a world of shit and cant even realize it, TK U MLJ LV NV

The ex-wife and new boyfriend need a little lesson.

I'd say castrate the boyfriend and terrify the ex every time she gets intimate with anyone. She should have had the courage to divorce him before she 'got on with her life', since he wasn't dead yet...

for souls bound to exist, TK U MLJ LV NV

Wife abandoned him for a guy that cheated with a married woman.

The cheating wife sure traded up.

Would certainly be fun to have, without the price he paid of course.

A partial story. Would be better to have an ending with some significant payback on the cheaters

good concept but unsatisfactory payback on ex & her BF

Interesting story concept, but where's the payback on the cheaters? Where's the aftermath. Story didn't go anywhere.

Strange little story, but entertaining. Thanks

Seems like half a story.

So, everyone wants payback? (See below) I don’t get it. How long was she supposed to wait? 3 years in a almost fully vegetative state? Recovery odds are pathetic. He got a second chance at life that was by error, pretty good redemption .

Incomplete.