All Comments on 'Come to Bed with Daddy'

Uhhhhhh... Great story line and in my humble option excellent choice of words... Soft, elegant and sexy-erotique... I like your style VERY much. And I hope there will be more of your incest stories... Keep up the great work... THANKS

now you ned to get the wife to join in this to she will love it

It was hot but so many fucking mistakes. From using the wrong words to saying he was fingering her virging pussy and then gets on his lap and rides him with no problem. It has a lot of potential. I say remove redo it and then repost it.

I liked the story it made my cock hard, but looking at your picture really made my cock to starting leaking. I like what you said on your bio page.

I have a step daughter fantasy and have had for years got to see her nude once and have jacked off to that vision so many times would love to live out your story with her

I was adopted, so it was more acceptable, but just nasty enough to be exciting😁He was a real 'bear' in bed and my adoptive mom knew what was going on and was happy to be relieved of her duties and I liked it, so she was cool with it😊And I was hot for it‼Brought back some good times❗Thx💖

I, she... SO MANY mistakes in this, that it's practically unreadable!

I really like this story. Yes it has mistakes and a proof read might of got most of them. But in the end it was a very sexy story that is right up there with my fantasy

The story starts out with a promising story arc and keeps that stride until shortly after arriving at the hotel. After the father showering scene it becomes nothing more than a crass, unrealistic and disappointing mess which falls apart much like the ending of "Jurassic World".

This story is so fucking hot! It teases and it delivers for my fantasy of being a fuck toy for Daddy. I want to read more!

I came so hard. I loved it

How could a female write an erotic story with such utter bullshit sex? Take the she was a virign bullshit out.....no way a grown man shoves 2 fingers right in...let alone a supposed big dick and no pain....a fucking woman should know this...you can not suck a clit from a bent over position and finger her...your head and body are in the way not comfortable...and a woman would enjoy it more from the front.....no she did not like a dry thumb in her ass, nor the dry ass big dick....true bullshit...just jumped from mastrabating to suck my dick....smh

Thank you for writing this. The premise of the story was really good. Nice pic in the prof too btw.

Too predictable and the many mistakes were distracting.