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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
can't you keep up with your own story?

in the first chapter, she'd never watched any videos. Now all of a sudden, she's 'watched her share of videos and read 50 shades'

kind of kills the story when the author forgets something he'd built into one of the characters.

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