All Comments on 'Coming and Going'

Nice, clever and sexy. Very good job indeed

A plain drawl of historical events without merit or eroticism. Gollleee, this was wonderfully drab without much of value for the poor bastard who loved her for some reason but she wouldn't let him watch 97,412 blow jobs from his friends.

Limp Dick Score = 1 (zero is low)

I remember this story from Penthouse letters. I liked it then but I love it now . I've been reading your stories for years, on this site and another one. I just wanted to let you know that I am one of your faithful followers, and think that you are one of the best ,keep up the good work.

This is the second story of yours that I've read. It was very well written, and the limp dick guy was wrong, I got a pretty good surge from it! Please... keep writing.

why do you hate woman that much?... man!!!!!

Even as a fantasy.

How tasteless

I know that you can do better than this disgusting drivel. How can anyone find such a train wreck enjoyable????

Gang banged at his funeral. Even for fiction, that was bad.

This story has absolutely NO appeal to a reader. Zero. If you can't see that this story is totally without merit, maybe you shouldn't be writing stories.

It was definitely over the top. This is the sweet spot carnal anarchy that other authors seek (imhapless hits it usually 50/50 according to my whacked standards)

I was half expecting Will Farrell to pop out and yell "Ma! Meatloaf!!!"

I am positively glad and so is Henry that he is dead.

to say nothing of her honesty, TK U MLJ LV NV

All the disgusting thing she does behind your back is really your fault.

Don't you dare feel sorry for Henry - any man dumb enough to get shitfaced the night of his wedding when HE'S A VIRGIN deserved to end up a cuckold for it.

He married the right slut; too bad - for him - he didn't use her the right way: as his exclusive toy.

but still 🤫 i don‘t get it how they made a story out of a pile of crap

the bitch must be proud of herself

gang banged in her wedding dress and then doing it again while mourning the death of her husband so much happiness and sorrow that she just had to share with someone well lots of someones

at least the husband won t have to look at her again maybe he will wait for her in his afterlife but i hope he haunts her til her death and beyond

This is now officially the worst JPB story I've read.

5 stars.

What a wonderful woman and such a considerate wife, she could give Mother Teresa a run for her money in the sainthood awards.

Just keep in mind that it’s another of JPB’s usual trips into la la land.

This actually meshes with a guy I knew, who banged a stripper at his bachelor party, one of the bridesmaids at his wedding and his wife's best friend at her funeral. This after being held back from jumping into the grave onto the coffin. Less than 6 months later he married again, after cheating his own children out of the inheritances his wife had left them.

Amusing satire, nothing serious. No bestiality anyway.

When you consider the nature of the works JPB actually submits to be published, you realize the stuff he thinks up but decides is too outlandish to print must be truly horrifying.

What a piece of shit.

No real love for her husband

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Not worth the time it took to read it.