All Comments on 'Coming Home Early from School'

I would like to see you continue 5*

Oh Yes, so HOT --- I how Jack and his little sister screw and eat each other all the time; that would be thrilling ! I think it would be so cool to have his sister give him a long Blowjob and let him cum down her throat and then kiss while he screws her nice and slow. They would become the best F buddies !! Please write another chapter as we would love it so much. Thanks.

Where's the rest of it? This was great.

Not bad. I would clear up your definition of Massive however. From the detail I would surmise you find 5 inches massive. Maybe try and explore that avenue a bit better.

Had my cock and me breathing in short breaths.

Excellent Episode.

I hope you add more chapters.

Almost good except for the squirting bullshit, the unreal dialogue and the final paragraph. Apart from that, not too bad.

"My name was Elisha,..."

Okay, so what's her name now?

"We were both breathing heavily and I was almost screaming his name now -- the neighbours could probably hear my brother fuck me."

To hell with the neighbors! What about their parents? 🤔

It's a cute concept that you executed very poorly. I could have really enjoyed it if you had done a better job of thinking it through instead of creating a single page jerk off piece. 2/5