Commander Murphy and the Mad Doctor

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"Wonderful, let me check my calendar for a second." The president turned his head and looked at someone in his office.

They heard him say, "Change that. I will be in Florida that weekend."

He turned back to the camera. "If the good Lord is willin' and the creek don't rise, the wife and I will be there. We can coordinate all this later."

Angie said, "Sir, Mr. President, may I beg a favor of you?"

"It would be my pleasure young lady, ask away."

"I have no living family, would you consider giving me away in our wedding?"

"Miss Angie I am honored that you asked me, I would love to do that for you, under one condition."

"What would that be Sir?"

"There must be absolutely no publicity and no press."

Andy answered, "Sir, with your permission, if you and the first Lady will stay with us in our home I can guarantee complete privacy. We live in a one square mile fenced and guarded compound. We have a very sophisticated communications system also.

"If you will take me fishing you have a deal. I wish I could see that big bass Angie caught."

"Sir, your wish is my command, as a matter of fact we have that very bass in a huge aquarium in our family room."

"Angie, this is some man you are marrying. He is quite amazing."

"Sir, I agree with you completely."

"Good day to both of you, I am looking forward to seeing both of you soon." His picture slowly faded away leaving the screen blank.

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TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 10 years ago
You have a franchise going here

I would be awesome to read more about them - pull in more action scenes and you have a series in the making lol

Send these to Stan Lee - and work up the action - add some more field agents and - wait we already have his series - oh well start your own.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
ADDITICTIVE

I agree with "maxx308"'s comment. The first story of yours that I read, a year or so ago, was "Brown Is Beautiful". I have read others of yours, in the past year or so, and Now reading each and every one from when you first posted till now.!

I am Soooo Glad that you are still writing in 2011.

Hope to read More of Your work in the years to come.

Keep up the Good Work!!

Ken

maxx308maxx308over 13 years ago
Addictive

Your stories are becoming addictive. Another 5 ***** read. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Liked this one too, but weaker than the other two

It would be nice if you included activities of his field agents, some of them should be compelling characters too. Showing the work from the agents point of view as well, would add new dimensions to the Commander Murphy stories.

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bornagainbornagainover 16 years ago
Great story

Its so good to see you bring Commander Murphy back i hope you are going to bring another chapter of the wedding and the president coming to the wedding will you ?

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga

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