All Comments on 'Compatible Bedfellows'

This is beautiful. I love how you took time to develop the situation and their relationship with one another. :) Great imagery and descriptions too, especially in that scene where they biked to the top of the hill.

This was a great story! You developed the characters at a nice easy pace and with realistic situations, except perhaps the part of sharing a studio apartment with some you don't know and of the opposite sex. When I did it there were two bed rooms. LOL. Thank you for the story.

Great story but you are going to have to add another chapter to let us know what happens.

great story id like to read more about the happy roommates

Your story radiates beauty and peace. Ty

I have read several of your stories. They read like a masterpiece. But you never give them an ending. It actually ruins the whole story for me.

Wow. No impossible physical characteristics, no bedroom gymnastics, no hours-long marathon sex sessions.

Hell, not even the pretty unrealistic, but practically obligatory simultaneous orgasm!

Instead, just two basically nice, ordinary people, who meet, get to know one another, take months to slide into a physical relationship, and (maybe) fall in love.

So close to realistic, and yet compelling in its simple direct approach.

The ambiguous ending was a little unsatisfying, but the story itself was great. You've got a way with dialogue that sounds very realistic. Five stars from me.

When does the pill get forgotten? When does the day come they realize...

You don't marry the one you can live WITH - you marry the one you can't live WITHOUT!

A classy piece of writing. Congratulations. One of the few not to contain grammatical or spelling errors : Always a bonus. Or if there were any the writing was so good I didn't notice them. Realistic and plausible. Thank you.

More please

But I'll reserve that until it's finished.

I hope it continues as well as it has started.

Please don't leave it too long for part 2 to appear !

You have written an absolutely wonderful story. Please write another following the lives of these two lovers. I look forward to reading more about these two.

I really enjoyed this. Very evocative and took me back to some experiences in my 20s I've never been entirely sure ever really happened. Aaaah youth, wasted on the young.

I really liked this story. One of the very best I've read here. Perfectly edited too. I'm not sure you can really add it it - it really has a completeness now. But I certainly look forward to whatever you do next.

Thanks for writing it for us.

This story seems good but it is unfinished.

This is easily one of the best stories on Literotica.

A perfect little vignette and much closer to what I think the Romance category here on Literotica should be like. Loved it!

I just wish it had gone a little further. Seemed like it was just not quite finished, to me.

Fun, but yeah, it felt somewhat incomplete to me. But I can't fault your intent.

I liked the story. I shared an apartment once when working overseas. We were both expats. We started as colleagues and progressed from there. This story is similar, except that Magda and the narrator had fewer items of furniture and less space. I enjoyed this story. Quite endearing. Thank you.

This is such a nice story in which a man and a woman show great respect for each other and slowly turn an awkward situation into something quite remarkable. The author is not in a hurry and neither is this reader. It is plenty titillating leading where it does. Good enough I would recommend it to my spouse. Congratulations. Keep writing, please!

I just read this again. I'd favorited it way back whenever I read it the first time. (I'm tempted to give it another 5*, but I try not to do that. Sometimes I do forget I've read a story, though.) But this one is worth a 5* rating.

Very nice. Not too unbelievable, given the right people.

And I disagree with those comments complaining that it lacks an ending. Life goes on, for a while. Episodes in our lives do end, but not all the loose ends get tied up. The story could go on a while and still not really come to much of a resolution--or it could go on a while and end with, oh, a fight, a murder, a wedding, whatever, and not be any better.

Thanks for writing this. You have a flair for stories like this.

-- WWC3

WilCox49

A sweet little story of a building relationship! I do like the fact that this is one of those wonderful stories that leaves the future to our imagination. Thank you for sharing.

I just discovered the treasure trove of your writings yesterday. This is number three... All have been sweet and nicely articulated budding relationships!

Pretty good relationship progression over only three pages. A sequel would be much appreciated.

Hi Hector

This story is cute and endearing. Thank you.

It brings back memories of an apartment mate and me gradually becoming much more.

I am grateful for your wonderful pacing of the story.

It started with a handshake

An elderly client told me that 19th century marriages were all arranged. "That's why they were so enduring." Hector tells a love story that started accidentally when a man and a woman, strangers, decided to rent an apartment together. It's an endearing story. When is she due? Her answer: "We've still got a couple of months," Well done!

To be continued with them together as a couple.

Don’t let the comments about it being unfinished bother you. I like the sense of it just hanging there…..

Nice story. Thank for writing it.

Enjoyed this story very much! It certainly begs for a sequel!

amazingly-written cute short story

This is one of my absolute favorite stories in all of Literotica, a wonderful story period in any literature. Thank you!