by Scorpio44a
The hero in this story is a real man, in the only way that matters. He is a gentleman in the best sense. This is some of the best writing I have ever had the pleasure to read. (And I read a lot!)
Well SCORPIO you have blessed us yet again with your creative skills. The giving of love with a touch of comedy – what more could anybody ask for? Stories of such high quality are rare at LITEROTICA these days. Pete.
Hey - still finding the occasional editing error or awkward phrase - a context editor could help - or some who will read for that purpose not the spelling or content enjoyment lol
Keep writing
I enjoyed the read, a man needs to know how to please a woman in a number of ways.
One of the more erotic stories that I have read on this site. Nice pacing for most of the story and then the ending is very rushed. The characters are a bit thin (translucent verging on transparent). Finally, this does not really seem to be compensating, more like adjusting. Overall, a very good story. Put some meat on it and could be great. Thanks. JPR