All Comments on 'Completely Unexpected'

by R410a

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A little short but good. I gave it 5 as usual.

Omart57Omart57almost 3 years ago

Hot, Sexy and Wonderful story, R410a! Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The new romance leading to engagement seemed a little hurried — but, it does happen! Nice work.

RRC2RRC2almost 3 years ago

Whadya mean it wasn't a romance? I disagree. A wonderful story, and while they may not have taken vows, they had a loving relationship that continues even after they closed the bedroom.

THANKS

ArediaArediaalmost 3 years ago

Great story - thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You mixed up your tenses early on and even in the same sentence. I know this is fantasy but somehow it was too far out there to believe she would even talk to him much less make him into her lover. Solid 4*.

oldsage_1oldsage_1almost 3 years ago

Oh quit complaining about the genre! I loved it as usual. Another R410a Masterpiece.

Cheers

SAGE

linnearlinnearalmost 3 years ago
Another Winner

Thank you for another great read, always a good day when I see a new release.

TonyspencerTonyspenceralmost 3 years ago

I thought it was as romantic as hell, both knew from the outset it wasn’t going to be forever but there was love and romance no abuse on either side. No, I thought it was a sweet and readable romance leading to a true romance at the end. 5* for me.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefalmost 3 years ago

Liked the story but I was a little confused when during the interview he told them "I don't live to far away", yet they offered to fly him in. Maybe I just missed something, other than that it was a very enjoyable read and I'm glad it worked out for him.

golfbum13golfbum13almost 3 years ago

Superb in the telling

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

A beautiful story. Loved it. AAAAAA++++++

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

How can a story this good get only 14 comments in more than three years? Put it on your to read list now!

J6480J6480about 1 year ago

Great tale, well constructed and readable. Good result 5 of the best

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Another good story. I don't think I read one bad story yet.

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