All Comments on 'Complicated Ch. 01'

Bengal Tiger comes to mind. This tale is as energized as a big cat, and energy is a rare story quality at LIT. Well-written, too.

Pare your use of WAS. Static verbs are short-cuts around action.

I appreciate the feedback because of the thought you put into your comment. I'm currently working on another story (not a romance) where I'm making a conscious attempt to incorporate some of the critical feedback I've received recently.

Happy reading!

please neva stop writing..romance

The rape at the start turned me off and if you've ever been raped, the idea of being raped is NOT exciting like she thought it would be.

If you were one of the readers who was too upset by the scene at the start to finish the story then please check the comment I have left in Ch 09-10. I don't want to comment here and ruin the story for those readers who wish to continue.

Siddhart(a) Hesse....hmmm... very well written, caprtivating from the beginning, take no advice from readers, the rape scene sets the tone for the story... first person is my choice as well, and you handle it easily... there are several writers from India on Storywrite.com, if that interests you... all the best, amicus

I almost fell off my chair, seeing your comment. It's always so weird when someone from the GB finds and comments on one of my stories.

Thank you for your encouraging words. As far as heeding reader advice goes, in this instance I couldn't even if I wanted to considering the entire story was submitted before anyone ever read or commented or any of the chapters.

What a strong start. Totally love your story. It's evening, and im contemplating on not going to work tomorrow so i can finish all the ten chapters now. Hahahahaha. Keep up the good work! =)

Its rare to come across writing this good on this site.