All Comments on 'Computer Games Ch. 02'

Your story was a little short but it was still good. Wish you could have gone into more detail as to what happened after he left the room. I only have to imagine what Mandy and John did afterwards. Keep the stories coming, would love to read more.

but how can you honestly think there will be no third chapter? I realize it is up to you but give me a break . . . after all that classy writing and originality to leave me without an arrival is just tooo cruel!

Images of a chapter 3 are indelibly on my brain!

Mandy's latest adventure in the hotel room was unbelievably decadent. For a teen-aged girl to give herslef to a middle aged man in that way is a combination of hot sex and sickness. As a man in his mid-fifties, I found it most arousing to imagine myself in John's place. As for Toby, I found it pathetic that he didn't pursue her with sexual drive of a young man and pound that pussy of hers.

Nookiehunter

Thirty year old wonder Author.

We love every word, phrase and story you author!!!

For example:

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"They get punished, sir" Mandy replied, teeth sinking into her bottom lip."

Thank you and you should see my girlfriend,

David

teamhumanity@live.com

Wow!

"Toby didn't dare imagine where the adventure was heading next."