by WFEATHER
Please keep this going ,she had the right tutors there are some red hot fiery women in central europe,believe you me.
Um, is this supposed to be chapter 1 or something, cause its extremely weak on its own. I'd say far too short for even a single chapter, but I hardly think this even covered a chapter worth of material.
SO FAR SO GOOD,HOWEVER IT SEEMS UNFINISHED.PLEASE ADD TO IT
no incest no taboo so why is it in this area and it is so short why did you even bother to write it total waste of time
Little point to posting this on Literotica since it could on any public bulletin board.
So many unfinished stories on here...........
It should be as non erotic story... Or it needs 2nd part where he fuck her...
Far too many of your stories just get started - and then stop dead.
I'm not sure why you do this, but it's become too frustrating so I'm giving up reading any more. A shame as the story lines are good, but then you just waste them !
Rapier
What a joke. He's her brother, and she was stripping online. It's his duty to beat her to a pulp with a baseball bat and leave her outside a veterinarian clinic, with photos of her shame superglued to her naked body. That's the only way these whores will learn.