All Comments on 'Confession'

by Bob Waters

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onyxessenceonyxessenceabout 18 years ago
You're a great writer.

I liked the story a lot. The characters were some of the most believable I've seen on this site, and it was remarkably well written, despite a typo or two. Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
POWER +WEALTH + men in there late 60's = EXPLOSIVE COMBINATION!

My favorite writer on this site is Shoguy. Her stories are without a doubt the best on this site. You have a similar writing style, but not nearly as hot as the stories from Shoguy. You should read her's. Good work. I do like the older men(60 ish) and teens, also the 11-to-12 inch endowment is perfect! Those combination's, plus stockings and high heels and men who stop at nothing to obtain what they want are explosive!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
THIS WAS NOT FORCED....

JUST GO HOME AND START THE DIVORCE ...OH AND WHILE YOU ARE AT IT SHOOT YOURSELF IN THE HEAD.....YOU'RE DUMB ENOUGH TO DO THAT

laventurelaventureover 10 years ago
Very Good

Good story, seems real, good descriptions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Suspenseful Ending

Excellent story! This ending was the right one. No matter what the author did from now on, some readers would think he did the wrong thing. Does she remain a coerced wife, become an eager and willing slut, or risk everything by telling her husband? Each option would have fans.

A part of me wanted Robin to trust her husband and immediately tell him after she returned from the Dallas Trade Show, but I also understood her hesitancy for fear her husband wouldn't believe her, and naive belief she could ignore it. I had the same mixed feelings after Jack and Harry got her to the hotel room. I noted her self resolution to turn the tables but also her confusion at enjoying the sex when she said: "All in all I felt great. Guilty as hell, angry at being manipulated, determined to get out of this somehow, but great."

Maybe the author can write 3 sequels, one for each option. Each option would provide a multitude of possibilities to develop what this story started.

SyzyguySyzyguyalmost 2 years ago

With Jack's apparent power it is difficult to know what she can do at this stage or how things will turn out; badly I suspect. Her Uncle Charles is a powerful lawyer and, presumably, well-connected so she is not powerless herself. The key lesson seems to be - if you are drugged and raped tell your husband and tell the police.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wonderful. Typo: nice should be niece.

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