by yakboy69
Please, do Not stop now this lovely lesbian love story mmm
Chapters 18-20 are needed here mmm
Aunt Helena
I loved the story! That being said, and keeping in mind that all of the chapters have been posted so I was able to binge read the whole story, I won't be reading any more of your work.
The character development, pace, and story were wonderful, but the flow of the story was terrible. 17 posts, and all except two or three posts were 1 page long. Really? I even went ahead and gave you 5*on most of them just for the story.
I'm not doing it any more. I understand what you are doing. This story should have been 3 posts at the most... I really feel 2. Assuming that you have an average vote of 4.5, doing it your way you have 17 posts with 4.5 average instead of 2 or 3.
This is all because Lit ranks authors by volume of posts and popularity (voting average). I am sure the number of followers an author has and the number of favorites a story has also count in the rating. Again 17 favorite count for more than 2 or 3 .
So, I congratulate you for your work on this story, and I thank you for sharing your work with us. Good bye and good luck with your writing.
I loved the story! That being said, and keeping in mind that all of the chapters have been posted so I was able to binge read the whole story, I won't be reading any more of your work.
The character development, pace, and story were wonderful, but the flow of the story was terrible. 17 posts, and all except two or three posts were 1 page long. Really? I even went ahead and gave you 5*on most of them just for the story.
I'm not doing it any more. I understand what you are doing. This story should have been 3 posts at the most... I really feel 2. Assuming that you have an average vote of 4.5, doing it your way you have 17 posts with 4.5 average instead of 2 or 3.
This is all because Lit ranks authors by volume of posts and popularity (voting average). I am sure the number of followers an author has and the number of favorites a story has also count in the rating. Again 17 favorite count for more than 2 or 3 .
So, I congratulate you for your work on this story, and I thank you for sharing your work with us. God bye and good luck with your writing. Good bye.
5 stars. Love it. Totally believable, human and logical.
Clearly (to me, at least) the two women come out; she has the baby. Ben becomes drawn to them both and they set up a tiresome raising the baby and loving each other selflessly in all the 4 possible permutations.
Another new plot development--pregnant. Wonder why she never thought about it while she was with Ben. 17 is the last chapter posted. I read it straight through. So many unfinished threads to this tale. I'm hoping that you aren't done yet. I will be watching.
Long time since CH-18 posted, sure looks like the author has moved on. I agree with previous posters that the numerous open threads demand closure. I've totally enjoyed the evolution of this story and sincerely hope more is coming. Double entendre totally not accidental.
A Great twist in this chapter. I’m really engaged with her loving relationship with Cathy. It gives a beacon of hope and horny lust, amidst the embers of her marriage dying. Loving life, flashing and indulging desires freely makes this series so sexy. A fun read… and tantalised to learn where her horniness takes her next.