by MSTarot
That was fun, although I got a bit confused at some point as to who was confessing to what. And I'm surprised none of them called Chase a liar at the end of the game. I hope Andy and Patricia become a couple after this. At least, by now they don't have any dark secrets to mess up things :-)
My new favorite flavor!
This story is classic MST. Another one in which I walk away knowing just how much you love women. That makes me smile.
Sounds like a fun game. I'd offer to play, but you know all my secrets!
Good story, or it would be with Patientlee's editing. Little things, like homonyms, seemed to get the better of you, and in one place you had words coming from someone who had pleft the room-- that sort of thing.
Not bad, but not at all up to your later standard.
You said: "This was wrote to see if I could handle multiple characters,"
Lets ignore the woeful grammar.
Who the fuck is Carol ?
She appeared from nowhere on the last page
They were fluid together, but I couldn't keep track of all the parts....