by Seahawk76
Great pacing, and wonderful character development....far more arousing than the usual Dom/sub discipline and fuck/suck pulp!! Always light up when I see a new chapter....and I like your mini-cliffhanger endings!! Keep it up!!
I hope this is somehow coming back to bite Barbara in a good way for the three girls, and that the protaganist gets released. I only want her and Anna to have the D/s relationship, as it sounds like a beautiful love interest. But please get Barbara in huge trouble, and free the girls