All Comments on 'Confrontation'

" She had never really thought much of her looks, but anyone and everyone in Denton County would tell whoever cared to listen that she was a stunner; her 157 pound frame packed the most womanly curves known to man; her breasts were a size 36D, her tummy was flat and defined from the many sit-ups she did every morning, her hips flared seductively and her ass was the subject of many bar gatherings, her legs were long and toned from jogging, rock climbing and mountain biking, her raven hair had been in a pixie cut since junior high- a decision she had taken when she realized her opponent wouldn't be able to pull her hair in a fight if it was shorter." Omg this was all one sentence! 😩 This was a good start with lots of potential to be awesome, but the run-ons kill. Haha, I'd say just monitor you commas and re-read every once in awhile. Aside from that... Good job!

where does sexual assault turn into hot sex? that makes her no better then the dumb bitch that she calls a friend.

Five stars completely. You deserved it with that good ass story. I should say that the shift of this submission was really sudden but then I remember the situation, so yeah it was great. Need more, please. Happy writing

Five.

It really don't seem like you have writer block to me. Because this is a smoking hot

story you just have posted. Five golden stars you deserve. And a cold shower

i need after reading this story. Thanks again for this passionate story.

My god i do love your writing. can't wait for Christmas to come back on line. i am a follower of your work.

While I did like this story Mitch and Rhea just made me angry. Men like Mitch can go jump off a cliff as far as I'm concerned. He's too old for games he says but he doesn't go to Rhea like a man from the get go and uses her best friend to get to her. He only cares about himself and what he wants and not about what she wants and that he probably just broke up a long lasting friendship from what we can tell so far.

Rhea so easily gave in to Mitch that I almost dismissed her completely. We get a good chunk about how she's been a fighter her entire life and she didn't even put up a serious fight. I will look for the next update to see how this story unfolds.

In real life I would hate him. This is fantasy and was smoking HOTTT. The point is that she is the one he really wants and because we know where he is coming from and how he feels about her (unlike in real life), I want more of them. Much more!!!

We usually see a story similar to this. However, the viewpoint would most likely be in Lynn's point of view. These characters bring a promising future of drama and hopefully love

Please tell me that you're gonna write more chapters for this story!!! OMG! I wanna know what will happen between Mitch & Rhea or will Lynn ever found out!! Please update!

That quickie was soo... F'n hott! I can't wait for the next part! ....hint....hint

Ooooh Weee! How do you go from going off on your best friends ex-man to fucking the hell out of him? Mitch should have kept her busy so she wouldn't have had time to regret it yet.

That shit was trifling as hell but it was so HOT. I cannot wait to see how this unfolds. Hmm. He didn't even use a condom...........Yeah this story could be sooo messy and good.

This is soo good. I hope you have a slew of ideas for this story because I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Ugh, what a pair of losers. He's a serial cheater and a control freak with an attitude problem, and she's a backstabbing slut who fucking turns on her best friend for a good lay. I'd say they probably deserve each other, but no woman deserves the beatings from a so-called "alpha" control freak like Mitch that inevitably come every time they decide a female is property and not actually a woman deserving of respect.

I agree with the previous comment, this is NOT worth rating.

I see the comments here and I just wanna know why fiction can't be unpredictable? Things happen! I personally liked it!

i like it!!! Good Story keep up the good work!!!!!!!

I dont like how it started ... the idiot guy who doesnt care that his gf caught him cheating and the best friend fuckin him wow .. that killed it for me

YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB LOVE THEM ALL

Get it white boy, dig that black pussy out. And that leads to the aftermath. So...what happens??

If Rhea was my friend I'd whoop that ass. Wow. I understand getting caught up, but damn!!!! That's messy. It was a really good chapter and I'm on to Ch. 02. -DC

You don't betray your friend; case closed.

Loved your previous story but this is not to my taste; friends come first.

Annabelle

I was a little upset at how aggressive he was, and I'd feel betrayed if I were her friend, but I think it gives the story depth and I like it so far.

It's so dirty and taboo, but I can't help but keep reading. Great job!

She is so weak to sexual desire...she shouldn't have done that with her best friend's ex who is apparently also a man-whore and a douchebag...And yet I'm intrigued. On to ch2!

Okay, I am a strong believer in friends before fellas, but you can't deny that was one sexy chapter! I would never put a man before my best friend. But you made me want to keep reading!

I can't wait to read all the chapters you have written!

1 question, did this happen to you?

5+5 more STARS!

I have a love hate battle with this story! It's my second time reading it and it feels wrong and right that I love their relationship, lol. Please keep writing more stories! 👏👏👏👏

Those two, the-once-reliable-best-friend-who-is-now-a-trifling-slut and that sleaze of man, really deserve each other. The thing is that there are people who are like that in reality. People who are selfish, ready to screw over anyone, and blame others for their own faults just so they an get what they want or cover up their mistakes. People who claim to be your friend and then backstab you. You can't trust anyone. Rhea has some nerve to talk Mitch's ear off about treating Lynn better after their dirty sex and being surprised at his suggestion in having a drink, wanting to develop a relationship with her. As if she is not the one who also messed up. The story starts off with a long description of how attractive she is as well as how much of a spit-fire she is but she submits so easily for a cheap lay with the same guy who treated Lynn, her ex-best friend (pretty sure no friend would condone this betrayal), like crap. This is so messy. Nonetheless this drama makes for a good storyline say for a t.v series if anyone is interested :)

Good beginning!

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