All Comments on 'Connecting Rod Ch. 09'

I look forward to each part. Something about the characters you have developed that makes one interested in what happens to them

The switch in POV works well here though I have to admit it does read a bit more superficial than when Rob is telling the tale. My first reaction was negative in the sense that there was no need to rehash everything but, then I began to enjoy the counterpoint and revealed details. Thanks.

I can't really think of anything else to say!

Whilst the detail in this part is interesting and adds to the story, the start does not adequately link it in to the previous parts. It could have started with a sentence stating that Shelly was explaining her history to, say, Shannon or another girlfriend of about her age, to link it into the previous parts.