All Comments on 'Connor the Conqueror Ch. 02'

It's good so far, but I am confused. It seems to be a romance between Connor and Natalie but then he starts getting involved with others. How can the romance continue or doesn't it?

I like what I've read so far and look forward to seeing where the story goes. I'd suggest you at least start to explain his newly acquired attraction magic or whatever it is before it gets too confusing.

Next chapter please!!!! This story rocks!!

You are obviously going somewhere with the odd behaviour. My main advice for something like this is try to remember to keep your characters varied and keep them themselves even as they act crazy.