All Comments on 'Conquered: Spoils of War Ch. 02'

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wonderful story. Well-written and very arousing. I look forward to your next chapter!

I read Anne Rice's version of Sleeping Beauty. This is written as I always wished that one had been... the possession over the girl, then kept and built into something special. If you keep going with that, you'll make me very happy. -smiling-

You truly have a knack for writing stories that pull the reader into the action and make you FEEL the sensuality of the tale. I love Conquered, and adore Innocent Pawn..I look forward to the next chapter of every story...and hope you update Captured soo too!

I look forward to reading more of this story. The King has the characteristics of all my favourite story heroes. :3

So I'll just have to beg you and say MORE!!! ^-^

this is a wonderful story... I love your people, they are so realistic... not just little puppets. I am looking forward to the next chapter! :-)

You're a really talented author wishfulthinking. Please continue this storyline, it's fabulous!! (By the way, why is it in nonhuman category??)

That was sexy and sensual. its writers like these taht encourage folks like me to visit literotica. i look forward to reading more stories from this person.

Great characters and story line!!! I am looking forward to the next chapters...

Great series! As always, very well written!

Good story. There is the issue of a woman's virginity however, which contrary to the popular myth, the eviidence of which lies on the outside of the vagina not the inside. It's a thin skin membrane around the vaginal opening. Too many people including published authors make that mistake.

There were also a few continuity issues. In the first chapter she's shaved and in the next he's staring at her golden fleece.

First off, wishful, I love your stories! But in response to the comment about hymens, you're absolutely right! I thought you were nuts, but I googled it (ahh the miracle of technology haha) and I found that the hymen is right outside of the vaginal opening. I had no idea! I thought it was by the cervix or something. Anyway, thanks for the correction... you might consider writing a How-to.

Anyway, wishful, it would be completely inappropriate and rude for me not to comment on this story itself. I first read your "Novice" stories, which I thought were amazing, then I read "Innocent Pawn," which was even better, and I'm thoroughly enjoying this series too. You put all of my fantasies so eloquently into words and I love it! Keep writing, because you definitely have a fan in me :)

I love all of your stories. Have you ever thought about being published? This one was written much better than the first chapter. I noticed very few grammatical mistakes. Do check your continuity though.

Seriously, wonderful job.

I think I'm the onl one that noticed that she got shaved in the first chapter but she seems to have pubes in ch. 2. Other than that, this story is captivating!

I can't imagaine any female-to-female sex without a feeling of horror.*

This book for our Dec. book club reading is by Bayard (sp? look it up). I just now start to question this vampiric representation of "lesbian" sex--

Never fear--I'm turned off forever.

*Almost like in "---I've honestly forgotten what I was about to write--

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ap1GrISdo88

"Sleep the clock around"--I didn't intend to. But sometimes one just has to. To be gentle with oneself."

"The Memory Will Shine"

All of my experiences with "lesbian" sex were horrible. Not because of the genders involved--but because of the politics. I'd almost rather die than experience any of that--those politics--again. I'd rather be with a gentle, "feminine," female or male. I don't care. Just not one of those whore/feminist/nazis who ruled feminism in Memphis in the late 1970's.

Well done, I am enjoying this story....for the third time.

I've been browsing Lit now for 5 yrs and I just love discovering unread gems like this I somehow previously missed. I can only imagine that wishful has moved on to published books and hope I can find her work someplace!