All Comments on 'Consequences Ch. 03'

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PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpetealmost 13 years ago
Thought reusing whole passages would lead to....

proper editing but at least the turn is towards the only relationship that could do justice to her betrayal. This does not suck yet, fairly deep in.Kudos.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My God, can you possibly make it more disgusting? What are you, a 19 year old college student that can't get laid?

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Another offering from one of LW better humor authors.

m1km1n30m1km1n305 months ago

Him sexing up his daughter after all that is where you started losing me. Comforting her? By the level of familiarity he and the daughter shared during sex, I’d say that definitely was not the first time he has used her.

His anger with his wife is justified. She started acting out fantasies with another man that she had never allowed her own husband to share. Then made a huge mistake involving her family when neither her husband nor daughter had consented.

However, he is as messed up as his wife as he also pulled the daughter into his sexed up fantasy life. Yuck.

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