All Comments on 'Consequences, Sandy Ch. 03'

by Scorpio44a

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thilltellthilltellover 12 years ago
First Chapters

Can be found under Scorpio44 . http://www.literotica.com/s/consequences-sandy

If you're like me you'll want to review before finishing the tale.

HonourHonourover 12 years ago
Glad the family is back

The technical stuff is excelent it is a pleasure to read an author who can actually comunicate in English, who understands how to use a dictionary, the structure and flow of a well crafted tale. *grin * ok my small rant over.

As always your writing is thought provoking and the love the characters display for others is inspiring.

thilltellthilltellover 12 years ago
Not the path I expected

But good read. Just me but they have held the high ground so well I feel Jenn and Martha should wait till after their divorces are final not just the hearings to fully integrate into the family. Really glad I reread the first two chapters, I had forgotten how good they were.

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 12 years ago
Thanks for the update -

I went back to re-read and as before liked it great deal - this is true to the original and to you I am glad you are picking up old threads to keep making new cloth -

Nice work as always and thanks for sharing -

oldtwitoldtwit5 months ago

I think that you should have posted the first parts on this log in as well.

Anyway, about this part, still good, so many names I do get lost sometimes, it's easy to see you have problems with "The Church " in one way and another, plenty of good arguments in this to get a real fight going in some places, but well put down on here

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