All Comments on 'Consulting Trip Surprise'

This story begs for a second chapter to see how he makes it to the 15th. Please continue on with a chapter 2.

Loved the story. A bit fast to the sex and I had to "suspend my disbelief" re: the situation, but that's what these stories are for... to take us where we've never been.

Give us the rest of the day and nite at least. I'm strokin' already!!

I hope there is going to be a follow up! Would love to hear about their exploits when the four of them get back to Freddie and Jackie's! But for now, i need to take care of my dripping pussy....

Very interesting story so far can't wait to see what happens next.

this story is awesome. i can't wait for part two!

kind of self explanitory!

I love your stories man, they're great reads and they're always so hot.

I'd love to read a part 2 to this story!

Hot, hot, hot. Loved the diner scene with the waitress and the Amanda - The story was too short - so many possibilities. Love the work. Good luck in the competition!

Now this is Nude Day!

VERY HOT READ! I hope you decide to write the follow up as others have suggested.

very enjoyable read ....... curious where you might take this one ..... so many possibilities ........ thanks for your creativity.

You have a rich imagination for fantasy. A fuck fuck here and a fuck fuck there. Equal opportunity fuckers. It was like falling into an X-rated Mayberry.

Nice job and good luck in the contest.

Please write a follow up to this story!

This story really does beg for a sequel. Very very hot. Thank you for the beautiful...um...READ. :D Hot stuff!

Hugely erotic.. and I love airplanes so why wouldn't I love a story about them? Great job.

(like slide vs slid and misspelling definitely) but I think I would find a thousand errors less distracting than your extraordinary conceit. I expected you and Amanda to become a relationship, but you don't give a damn about her or Jenny or Freddie or Jackie. As you often remark, you seem to usually think with your small head. You appear to be a fuck machine with no brain. I promise you, few women, myself included, want to share themselves with someone so shallow.

You really need to continue this story. Hats off. Please give us the next chapter soon.

It really need to be continued and involving Amanda in lesbian sex with both of them

God, you are so like my first wife, leaving me hanging and never following through on the things that matter. Like finishing the story, making your fans happier than they are, lol. Anyway, as far as it goes, this one is a keeper but who knows where it goes from here. Cheers from the snowbank.

You never disappoint, leave me wanting more absolutely but never disappoint.

Thank you.