All Comments on 'Contract Killer's Next Hit'

Great idea and very easy to read. The one liners and side notes are perfect. Nice job!

very individual style, witty, entertaining and hot.

This story flowed smoothly from the beginning to the end. It was poetry. My only regret was that he didn't kill his rival after copulation. That would have been the appropriate summation of that relationship. You chickened out in that scene. Still, this was delightful read.

So cliche' it hurt! The bad guy is holding a gun on the good guy, but instead of shooting, decides to have a chat and reveal all the bad people's plans. This allows said good guy an opportunity to survive the encounter.

A deadly hitwoman is hired to kill a deadly hitman. There's absolutely no way she would stop to have a chat before killing him.