by LaPatitMort
Unfortunately being 80 when the child goes to college can be a bit of a problem. I have difficulty giving my grand children proper attention. My joints hurt.....
Story wa swell developed, well written, and good! I very much enjoyed it all, and was always kept interested. The three main characters were each believable and true to character, Good plot, well written and with enough pathos and hornieness to be entertaining. Thank you!
LINDA AND JIM SEEM TO JUST FIT TOGETHER. SHE HAD BEEN TRICKED LIED TO USED LIKE A PARTY HOST NOT A TRUE WIFE BY HER HUSBAND. NOW SHE REALLY HAD NO CHOICE BROKE NO CAR NO JOB NO HOPES LINDA AND JIM FOUND EACH OTHER THANKS TO SARA THAT REFUSED TO LEAVE HER JOB AND BOYFRIEND TO BE WITH JIM FOR A YEAR. 5 STARS PLUS A REALL GOOD LOVE STORY IT IS IN MY FAVORITES.
RON
But not the middle of this story. I don't care for mature stories because they are mostly older men and younger women,,,almost never works in the end....she's horney and he can't perform...THAT IS REALITY!!! not a story. The kinky CRAP turns me off especially in any so called "Romance" story. It shows an EXTREME lack of any TRUE LOVE. a romance without true love, not happening! I skim over quickly blow by blow sex in a "Romance" story because it's all the same on literotica. The very best authors with the highest ratings never do blow by blow sex. They can write just a few words and convey great erotic sex between a couple. So your beginning and endings were worth 5 stars. Fix the middle, read how great authors mention sex and you, author can be great too...
Passion and emotion. 3 great individual, well-defined characters.
Heck, I know it was not realistic. But there was a touch of realism in -- albeit pleasurably -- unsuccessfully interviewing the applicants. Loved the wording of the ad (rather than just saying he advertised). Cleverly worded ad too.
Easily 5 stars
Paul in Oklahoma
It isn't finished and needs another chapter. Wonderful story.