All Comments on 'Control Ch. 01'

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Anonymousover 17 years ago

Very erotic and sensual

Great story. I just love the way you wrote this.

Anonymousover 17 years ago

Incredible

This is my fantasy spelled out perfectly...still looking for the man to fulfill it.

PrincessJezebel over 14 years ago

And good spelling, too! :)

Wow! I love the way you write and your descrptions of the sex are very erotic! But I must admit, as an anal-retentive proofreader, that I was overcome with joy to FINALLY find an author on here who not only knew how to use the word "taut," but also how to spell it correctly! Keep up the good work!

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