All Comments on 'Control Ch. 02'

Seriously, this was not much of a story. It was very weak. The language was horrible-spelling, grammar,

I enjoyed this. I'm really interested to see where the story is going and actually check back for updates.

I'm not into father/daughter stuff at all in any way, like it kind of disturbs me (not shaming anyone, it's just a personal thing), but I'm honestly just really curious about what's going to happen.

I look forward to a continuation of the series! Good job! c:

What a family!!!

Where will it go from here?