All Comments on 'Conumdrum Ch. 03'

with each chapter. I wonder, does this sort of thing really exist, the sublimental messaging and taking control over someones submissive mind? I think it is true to a point because it use to be used on television commercials in order to drink a soft drink, name brand unknown. I hope that the culprits put up a fight and they are all kneecapped when the coppers get there. Maybe, old Headly could put a little something in their head that would make them sit there and masturbate all the time. Tit for Tat.

I never ever read BDSM stories personally i dont like them but this story is different.I liked the "heroes" character. Eventhough many will call him a wimp husband but he not a one.There are many innocent womens like beth who are pushed into such things by hook or crook.Matt has a lion's heart cause to except his wife after knowing what she's upto is something which everyone will not except.I just hope the story remains good & flow like this.6 more to go.HAPPY NEW YEAR TO EVERYONE.

Comming along nicely.

BUT, the story is starting in my opinion to bog down. Get on w/ it, or you'll be 22 chapters into details of the underwear his ops team will be wearing, instead of Beth getting back home, so they can begin to move on

Great job, keep writing. Truly interesting.

You write well but I'm beginning to wonder why this is categorized as a Loving Wives story It seems to go from BDSM to Mind Ctl and even Sci-Fi.What direction are you going into next?

the Ct. Yankee

where are these planned military actions to take place? I may have missed something in my reading of the story - but I don't recall that, Matt, Gary et al. had determined where the country house at which Matt's wife was purposely being held was known. Matt's assembled group is represented by military people having had vast experience in the near east wars during the past decade plus; they remain me of what I read about the rough bunch of men named the Carson Raiders of the U.S. marines during the 2nd World War. Surely they will be up again a group of equally forceful, well financed men whose intentions are evil. RAG

war time commando operation (behind enemy lines), with all the gizmos and jargon. It's all over the place, but where it should be - how and why the wife (not a robot yet) turned to the pursuit of extra curricular sexual adventures without sharing any of it with her husband. It's the only dramatic point in the story, and the only place the story does not get into.

The only thing that disconcerts me is that there's an awful lot of speculation by the psychologist... and before that, speculation by Gary. It is just freaky and makes them sound like oracles, even if they are genii

Hopefully the story doesn't get bogged down in excess detail.

she stepped on a crack and broke her own back

A nice piece of writing so far.

You keep on writing good story os far.

Thanks for the offering.

No phone call for ten days would have been a deal breaker. Not a big deal for the story, but would be in real life. There would be a confrontation for this fact. Maybe it will be covered in the next chapter.

Alright now. Enough of the planning. Let's get to it.

Too much meaningless mumbo jumbo. Move the story along.

Story going in every direction except forward. Well written twaddle!

Very rare, for me, I give up!

when DWornock likes it?

Well at one time or another she had to make the decision to watch the videos and come back to them often enough to be influenced by the subliminals. So, she did make a decision to do this. That is on her. As for the supposed hypnotism and drugs that only happened, if at all, after she made a concentrated effort to meet with these people. Submissive she might be but the choice to give herself to them was hers and they didn't force her to seek them out. I read in one of the comments on another part that she was predestined to do this and nothing she could have done would have changed it. Pure populist psychobabble at it's very worst. You may have an inclination to do something and you may have a physical or psychological bent to respond in a certain way, but you can make the conscious effort not to do it. Called free will and is prevalent in humans everywhere. Hubby is sure a forgiving kind of guy and I don't want to make any disparaging remarks about Brits, but he sure is one it seems. Hope he can learn to enjoy cleaning up after her masters, cause it will be on him to do.

You are writing this story to show how to protect a cheater from the consequences of her actions. I was drugged is right up there with "It's not what you think "!

The preparations for a raid.

5/5