by SaphirBlack
More please. I hope you take this where you briefly mentioned it would go, in the first chapter. ..
This is a story I would actually read again. I do wish you would correct typos and other grammatical errors, as they have a negative impact on some crucial moments. Otherwise, I would have given the story a 5. I sure hope to see a part 3, and more Daddy/daughter stories from you. Great job!!!
Hello!
I was wondering if you still planned on continuing the story?
Thank you!