by Dave933
i'm presuming that evelyn doesnt come home or she got into trouble while away and is marked or bruised so not able to complete marriage contract. maybe she can be her brothers maid?
with the storyline and the realistic georgian setup, which shows the effort and knowledge the author put into this quite arousing story.
I am waiting for further parts to come a.s.a.p.!
I normally skip historic period pieces such as this one, so I don't know why I started reading it. It held my attention and I wonder if the sister will be found or will the brother be found out. Mr. Graves sounds like he might get irritable if he finds out he has been tricked. I like that his character is dominant with a sense of entitlement, even though he has worked his way to where he is.
Please keep what I think is a strong storyline going and write more soon. xoxo.
the details are spot on. Very impressive. I can't wait for the next part.
Nice work! I have just today found this site, and am quite pleased to see such literary talent. One could almost see this guy falling into the sub-sissy mode, as if such an effort was only required to save the family estate. Clearly he wanted to be a girl for some time.
I enjoyed this period piece immensely. The flow of the story seems as though it is actually taking place and I am viewing it through a hazy time warp. I shall continue to enjoy the next chapter. Well done!
I really love the way you took your time with this story and slowly developed the bride-to-be's sexual awakening. I suspect he is going to love being a bride, and that his sister wont get the gig!
Please write some more.
Very imaginative mix of history, adventure, and sensation. Quite the journey. Can't wait to check if there if there is more. I hope so. 😘
Xoxo,
Di
Five stars just for the craftsmanship of this story. The details of the period are exquisite. Thank you.
Looking forward to the next chapter.