by MisterReason
This is one of the few recent incest stories on here with any credibility. Great stuff, keep up the good work. Other "would be" authors ought to read this & realize that they don't need 38DD's and 10" dicks to gain readers.
Buried once again on the second New page on the first day of release, MisterReason ain't feeling the love from literotica these days, but I appreciate the support from the readers who find and read my stuff. Thanks. Comments are always welcome, good back or indifferent.
hope there is more to come, steve should pull his head out of his ass and see were it goes
Time for Dave to realize that he is better than what she is getting from the others - could get fun and do interesting things since she will do anything for him.
Credable story, well written, had me hard and cummin through most of it, guess it must be my age ,....... 52
It took me a moment to remember how many homely women I've made love too to appriciate what was going on here. There is a certain charm and excitment to fucking a woman that isn't a dream girl-especially if you're related to her. Pretty well writen and yes, you had me jerking off and that's all that you want from erotica.
Aunty is a cold blooded freak. I wouldn't want her skinny ass either.
As someone who enjoys not only writing but reading about women who don't fit the usual literotica mold of perfect bodies and dazzling beauty, let me say that I enjoyed this story very much, despite incest not being one of my interests.
As you age, you start appreciating women in different ways, and I really can't get into many of these literotica stories that feature women who are drop dead gorgeous. Where are these women? As Jerry said in a Seinfield episode after claiming that a miniscule number of people are really attractive, "Have you been to the DMV office lately?" It's true, and that why I like to read about people that remind of actual folks. I also haven't looked at a Playboy in decades either. To each his or her own.
I enjoyed the different viewpoints of the two main characters, with the predatory nature of the young guy on the prowl for older women, and the desperation of the woman who longs for companionship. Nice noting the aunt mentioning the double standard, whereas the male who counts notches on the headboard is admired but the woman who does the same thing is belittled.
YOU PICKED SO STRANGE GROUP OF PEOPLE TO USE, AN UNHAPPY WIFE (his aunt) A HORNY YOUNG MAN (her nephew) A HORSE BALL (her husband) AND A HORNY ROOM MATE (male dorm pal his). IT WAS INCEST WITH A TWIST, A PART TWO SHOULD GET MOM IN THE STORY, MOM CHECKING ON HER SISTER AND HUSBAND. AND A TRIP TO THE BLUE DEVIL WITH SIS. JUST A THOUGHT.................................................. A FAN............................LAROC OF AGES
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, as the ageless adage implies!! Steven has found beauty in his aunt Marie; it has worked well for them, to a point. Nephew Steven is troubled that a lady he is smitten with, his aunt Marie, that he obviously adores, is in the throes of her mid-life menopause and her libido is working over time!! At worse I would imagine he will come to grips with his dilemma; his aunt certainly cares enough for him to offer her best to appease him, trying to maintain their social and familial relationships intact. Hopefully, and I pray that Aunt Marie succeeds!!
nicely written story wish aunt wasnt in to letting guys use her like she does seemed like nephew really liked her and had mixed emotions on the whole thing maybe write some more to this story and let jr. figure it out
Plain girls need attention as much as those 40DD bombshell blondes with hourglass figures. The fact that they are probably more appreciative than the popular ones makes me think of them as being preferable on my list. Thanks for a story that sounds more like an actual encounter than many of those found here.
I'm very glad I found this. Well written and not the usual fare. This leads me to see what other little gems you have written
I know I read this about two years ago. It was worthy of a reread.
Thanks
I had sex with a skinny older woman or two. One was a widow who wanted to be locpved again and invited me to her place and then put up false resistance. I was a friend for the day but never returned. The other was a more desperate woman and was my "friend" for about a week. That was an error and we parted. The moral is everyone loves not matter the age and sex is god if both like the act.
Nice story.
I really enjoyed the bit of emotional turmoil from the guy you added in. It really bumped the quality up a notch & gave it some more depth.
I loved the story but the ending just depressed me. I enjoy a happy ending to these types of stories. It would have been nice to read another chapter.
His aunt is manipulative and a basic slut nothing else.
She cucked him knowingly and when he still wanted her afterwards it was over.
She will continue to cuck him with probably every other friend he has and he is still gonna come back to her.
Terrible aftertaste
Mr. Reason,
Ya took us on a hell of a ride there.
Time for the next part, and bringing this family back together.
WB
5stars for the storyline but little mistakes. "She put her hands between her head". Perhaps legs would be better