All Comments on 'Could I Be Wrong? - A Sequel'

Cute ending! Please write your own stories.

5

Coincidence or irony? D

A nod and hint of a smile from Gibbs, especially for the armadillo. I like Blessed Jake. I think he’s got potential as Peter’s garbage man. I hope you resurrect him in future epilogues - or maybe even give him his own story as a main character!?! Thanks for the chuckle to start my morning.

Noice…!

5 stars

Urgh dont write your own stories

Warped.

Well... "Texas speed bumps" was a pretty good ending joke.

5 stars for a well-written, quick hit of a story that added a few giggles to the original work, which was good on its own, but this did add a nice bit of snark in the revenge on the predator.

Always a pleasure to see a new one with your name on it...

Perfect! Thanks for writing!

The original author wrote a new story that was posted on here yesterday.

Pretty Good sequel, but the original was just posted 2 weeks ago so I can see how they wanted permission

Fun

lmfao

Boyd's too nice. This was a God damned waste of time. Its not eroticism. Try again next time.

Ok, that's a whimsical, funny ending to someone else's story.

and a sequel, where after he becomes the proverbial "speed bump"...another reincarnation as a possum?

Very funny, The Bear.

No need for jokes after the comical 'heaven scene' story.

Nice job LT56Linebacker

One of the worst stories ever written.

What happened to the final chapter of Jacks rebirth? I the been 3 weeks since chapter 2 was published. Why do authors on here do that? What can’t they finish the damn story, then publish chapters a couple of days apart?

So….as wifey leaves divorce court, hubby is 15 miles away stalking asshole?

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And then wifey somehow gets her clunker to traverse those 15 miles and just happens to slam into asshole who is running from hubby? Sorry, Bear, but your “sequel” sucked.

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What saved the little tale was your post mortem of Asshole. Brilliant!

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3 ***

Okay, I can see why ttt59 wouldn’t give permission to a hack. This was awful on so many levels.

Gave me a good chuckle

Scores 4/5

The Bear found a chew toy!! LMAO!! All the best lawyers are in hell. NICE!!

I read the intro and a couple paragraphs and jumped straight here. I don't like sequels with no background, just s "read the original" making us go searching. Either summarize, or otherwise provide background info, perhaps some paragraphs from the original--ANYTHING, I am now moving on to more informative works. No stars. DIDN'T EVEN PROVIDE A LINK TO THE ORIGINAL. Not wasting my time.

JPB

JPB

I like how the cheater actually ran over the guy! Perfect.

A shifty thing to do to armadillos....

Hahahahahahaha

ttt59 posted a story in LW yesterday. Sounds like he is around and just didn’t want to talk to you!

It's kind of funny that you made a joke about spelling lawsuit after having Satan file a "suite."

This story was riveting in that the ending was not what I was anticipating. As we say in another world, BZ.

It appears worst comments are assnomeous.

LOVE slap-hapy-papy #0

Zzzzzzzz.

So what happens to him when he dies as an armadillo?

Neat !

Maybe, Jake willing, Jill will get him again.

lol i may use the post life idea some day

Hahaha 3 ⭐️⭐️⭐️

3 stars, average at best, neat concept the lover getting hit by the ex-wife but otherwise nothing really all that interesting about the story. Didn't add anything really to the original, didn't expand upon it or create something that stands on its own using the original as a jumping off point. Not saying its bad, its not and is pretty humorous at times, but it is unnecessary.

5 stars. Nice BTB on both sides of the cheating pair. He gets just desserts, she gets a psych trauma and hopefully legal trouble.

I do feel bad for other armadillos though. What did THEY do to deserve being inflicted that SOB with?

I agree with one of the commenters below about writing sequels to another person's story without providing more than a "go search for it" approach. Literotica allows you to insert a link the original story, so you can make it that simple for people to go read the original before reading your sequel...

You shouldn't be posting this with the author's permission. You've tried to reach out and not heard back?? Give me a break - ttt59 isn't some long-lost author, he just posted a story this week! Hell, the story on which you're piggy-backing isn't even a *month* old.

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You really should pull this until you get ttt59's permission . . . or maybe wait until he hasn't been active for a few years, not a few days.

Dude, ttt59 just posted a story the day before you posted this. He/she/it is still out there.

LMAO

I liked it. It was a fun quick read. If anything all the author did was use a couple of the characters for his own ending. And in doing so created a fun little tale. Thank You and I gave it 5 stars and a lot of Karma. :-)

Great humorous touch

Adulterers are damned to the second circle of hell. Although I always viewed cheating as the ultimate betrayal; and the ninth circle--the deepest darkest pit--of the inferno is for the betrayers. I would send them there...but no one ever listens to me

Jim and that ho both got theirs...GOOD!!

FUN STORY!

amusing! 5******!!

Not enough to the story to earn a '5', but amusing nonetheless.

And in Tennessee opossums are referred to as speed bumps. They have got to be one of the most stupid and suicidal animals on the face of the earth. I mean what animal runs across the road. Realizes that they made it still alive and runs back.

If she has an STD, then so does Lover Boy.

Thank you for the info, I didn't know the " Texas Speed Bump" thing.😁😂

I personally think deer are some of the stupidest creatures after a crowd of humans of course to ever pollute the earth, I see and smell the dumb things multiple times daily.