All Comments on 'Country Living Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
short and sweet

Stephen is one focused young motherfucker. He's hardly inside the door before he's inside his mom. What the boy's got between his legs is way way up between his mother's legs. "I swear I could feel the head of my cock rubbing against her womb." Yep the brazen young fellow's up his own mother's cunt, up to his balls. Mom's a rag doll to his powerful prick, he blows his balls up the same hole he came out of any old time he fucking feels like it. The perfect mother and son relationship.

Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesabout 9 years ago
Nice way to intrigue your readers.

Loved the retrospective back story. It made me want to read further to explain more about what was happening, and why. It made the story work as a stand-alone, or as an introduction to a series. Great job.

redlion75redlion75about 9 years ago

how could he not be pissed at her? any mother that chooses a man over her kids especially an innocent kid is no mother i would want to be around.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

A story doesnt have to be long to be good. Short and sweet. Or should I say Short and not sweet and good. But she should have sat on his face and gagged the sob.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Just not much to it no build up or anything just come inside and fuck his mother and leave !!!!!!! a 3

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